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Hidden in the shadows
There's nothing left to say
I'm waiting for the moment
When I drop down on my prey

He walks towards the spot
Where my ambush lies in wait
There's nothing he can do
Final move, checkmate.
©2006-2009 ~ToiletBrush
:icontoiletbrush:

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Short one this, but I'm quite happy with it.

enjoy :)

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:iconbeautyisfromwithin:
That's really cool.

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"The weak and ill-constituted shall perish: first principle of our philanthropy. And one shall help them do so."

"But where has all the rum gone?"
:icontoiletbrush:
thanks

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Man is the only creature that refuses to be what he is.
- Albert Camus
:iconbeautyisfromwithin:
I love the last bit "Final move, checkmate"

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"The weak and ill-constituted shall perish: first principle of our philanthropy. And one shall help them do so."

"But where has all the rum gone?"
:icontoiletbrush:
yeah im proud of that line hehe. i actually really like this poem, its short and it has no real purpose or point, but its just... yeah. i dunno lol but i guess im a bit bias

--
Man is the only creature that refuses to be what he is.
- Albert Camus
:iconthebreakawaymarionet:
The rhythm is perfect. woot.
:icontoiletbrush:
Thank you :)

--
Man is the only creature that refuses to be what he is.
- Albert Camus

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